Give a generic draft a more deliberate edit
Kill the Robot Voice focuses on the sentence-level choices that change how writing feels. It organizes the work into practical checks, helping you notice monotonous rhythms, abstract wording and places where your own perspective is missing.
Keep the checklist beside a draft and work through one type of edit at a time. It provides a clear starting point when a piece is readable but lacks character.
What you’ll find inside
- The Pulse Check for repetitive sentence rhythms.
- The Chop technique for varying pace and emphasis.
- Sensory detail to replace vague or abstract language.
- An Opinion Spike to bring in a clear point of view.
- A review of hedging and impersonal phrasing.
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